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 A poem of a soulless mind  [E]
An attempt at a blank verse poem, quite poorly written unfortunately.
by Harvey Gray
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Wow! Is it poetry from a newbie? The poem has a lot of depth. In my opinion, it tells the story of an unsatisfied soul.
We, the people who are habituated to the World minutely, often observe this kind of unfortunate situation. A person may see a lot of dreams. For the sake of the targets, that person ignores a lot of blissful moments. Ultimately, that person realizes that it was the wrong decision. But, the time is very cruel. He waits for none. So, we have nothing left. So, humans have nothing can do except regret.
First, the person becomes frustrated and has no word of consolation to self! Can you imagine that helpless circumstance?
Not only that, but due to ignorance, the relationship broke up, already. That person lives alone and meaningless life. There is nobody to share self-joys and sorrows with anybody.
The poet paints those scenarios fantastically this pathetically.
It is an extraordinary creation. I hope that this type of creativity will entertain us forever.
Keep writing.





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