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 A Bridge to Today: An Excellent Tomorrow  [E]
A story telling moment for sure -be great -work hard, remain ready, & be grateful -a poem.
by Tim Chiu
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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It is another excellent creation by the poet. There is no doubt about it. We must enjoy the present but should not forget about our future. We should give hard labour to build our future perfect. It is our personal need.
We have our social needs, too. Nowadays our colonial harmony is in real danger. If we want improvement of our society, we must regain it as soon as possible. Otherwise, we will become a backward class, which we do not want.
The poet wants a total improvement of our society. He inspires us to do so. We will remain grateful to him for his wonderful contributions as a whole to society.


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