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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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This is another exciting chapter of the book. The writer already imposes a godly impression on the character of Sylvia. There is no doubt about it.
But, in this part, the author tries to project Sylvia as a human. Especially, when she is with her friend Emily. Sylvia spends some emotional moments with her. They share their thoughts, love and pains like other friends do. This is the importance of a friendship that helps you to release your tresses.
But after the entrance of Thomas, Sylvia returns to her original personality. That proves that the relationship with a true friend is different from other relations. It is even sweeter than honey. The episode ends with keeping her promise.
We may continue our lives with several entities. My suggestion is to go on with that firm message. As we feel we are in the real world.
It is an excellent going. Keep this rhythm.


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