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Review #4713660
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 10:10 Who Are You?  [E]
Poetry Bit
by Queen Kee
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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It is indeed a brilliant writing effort from a newbie author. It is a long poem that is not only dramatic but also deals with human psychology. It is mysterious, too. Overall, it becomes a completely different type of love poetry.
A love relationship cannot be built easily. You have to cross many ifs and buts. Ultimately, true love wins. But that requires a lot of patience. The poet draws realistic and lively images. The style of writing is different but attractive. The author creates a separate variety.
I can see a mistake what you do. You do not use the subject column properly. In this space, you should write what you going to write about. It will help the readers.
Anyway, it is a good beginning.
Keep writing.


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