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Thoughts  [E]
One way I like to explain my thoughts to people is: "Your overthinking is my thinking."
by B. Delaney
Review of Thoughts  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Wow! What a lovely presentation it is! Undoubtedly, it is such poetry where the poet expresses a lot of things but in a minimum space.
A teenager is expressing self-thoughts. It is very much emotional. There is no doubt about it. What can the narrator think? That is surrounding the loving one. That thinking crosses that limit line where the teller forgets how to sleep or takes some rest. Therefore, mental and physical damage is inevitable. There is no way to get rid of the situation.
There is no such error. But you should be careful about the size of the letters. That should be increased. Otherwise, it can not be read by all sections of readers.
It is a gorgeous beginning. Go ahead.

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