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 A little something to remember me by  [E]
A little introduction to what has driven me to be an author on here.
by C. Sykes
Review by Beholden
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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An interesting look into another's life and thinking. If I can answer a few questions I came across on the way: Yes, I'm old enough to remember Win 98. In fact, I'm old enough to remember Win 3.1 and even a world before computers became more than a glint in a codebreaker's eye.

I've been a thinker all my life, so I have no idea what it feels like to be a doer. Your transition from one to the other may well be a process that most people go through. At least, they will certainly experience thinking if they last into old age. As for vomiting all over WDC, go ahead - that's what it's for. Be aware, however, that practice makes not perfect but better, especially when it comes to writing. Judging by your standard of writing now, I'd say you'll be producing excellent stuff in very little time.

Don't let me saying that give you a swollen head, however. There is always someone better than we are, no matter how good we get. And you need to polish your editing/proofreading skills, too. There are a few typos in this plus an awkward sentence or two. In other words, you're human, just like the rest of us. The best typo of all was the one in your last line - it makes you sound like a Brit. *BigSmile*

As for being a follower, friendship is a growing thing, I think you'll agree.

This essay is a great introduction to you. I read the other two items in your portfolio and I'd say it's time to start writing both the daily thing you've promised, and some things a bit more on the creative side. Short stories are a good way to start, and a lot of people write poetry at first. Whatever you decide, enjoy the doing!

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