Hi, Star, this is a great beginning to a story. It encourages the reader to want to continue to read, to discover what’s going to happen next.
It asks so many questions. Why is Chloe so anxious? Did you mean to say : The only regret she had was when she married him. ?
Or that because of his job was the only regret?
I wasn’t sure if she wished she hadn’t married him or not.
It made me wonder if he wasn’t a good husband but the subsequent words dispelled that concern. Ian seems long suffering but kind and patient with Chloe’s moods. Perhaps you can make that a little clearer.
I would have really appreciated a larger font size. The default text size on WdC is 3, a size 4 is much easier to read and perhaps more readers will be tempted to.
I’ll be waiting to see what happens next, Star. Well done.
Sue

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