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The Art of Mingling  [E]
24 syllable poetry - contest entry
by Ned
Review by Beholden
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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This is very clever - a poem of just 24 syllables that completely nails the subject. Wonderful observation that sees through the apparent cuteness to the underlying deception. Oh, the subject is practised (Brit spelling, sorry) but the poet's not fooled!

Of course, I have to wag my finger and mention the fact that two of the selected genres are wasted. No one does searches for Contest Entry or Other (although it would be interesting to see what results Other brings in!). Better would be Cultural and Personal. Sometimes it's necessary to stretch things a little for the third choice but it's worth it if you want to increase readership and the chance to win Quills and so on.

Apart from that, I can't fault it. Truly accurate and insightful work.

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