I found this poem on Read & Review and enjoyed it a lot. I found myself smiling at the end as the protagonist escapes from what always has been to a new possibility of what may be. I think part of the poem's charm is the simplicity. At first glance it doesn't seem to say a lot, but it says just enough and says it very well. My only suggestion is that you could add a clock-themed cover image to help set the mood.

Keep writing!


Words Whirling 'Round

A poet merely pens a mirror, the reader brings the reflection.

                       

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .