Hi,
this is a wonderful descriptive piece of writing. I am especially enthralled by the awesome alliteration you have used in the following sentence.

"The moon stretched soundly into the night and snuggled into the thick black clouds beginning to stir."

I am looking at the stretching moon hiding behind the veil of black clouds.

Imagery is visual and at once effective.


Edit-

"...bounced of the wet walls."
(...bounced off the wet walls.)

The word Monkey is repeated too many times. Is it for some special effect?

I am just curious, nothing more.

Write on!


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