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 The Value of a Noun  [E]
This is cute, about the way words are.
by Spongebob Squarepants
Review by DragonPrince
Rated: E | (4.5)
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That was a great short story. It is a shame that the noun had to die, but at least the other noun came in, and the adjective managed to talk some sense into her. The other noun should have listened to the adjective and he would have been able to survive getting erased and changed. Still, I really liked it, but I do not think that it was a comedy. Instead, it was quite sad, but it was definitely based on writing and a fantasy genre.
Still there were a few mistakes. Avoid using words that end in 'ly'. I think I've told everyone this. Also, cut the dialogue to the bone, so that you can get to your point with less words. Apart from that I liked it. Keep writing.

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