Wow! that is all I've got to say to that. It is true. Writing does make me feel like that at times. I loved the fact that towards the end she burnt all of her writing, but went back to writing again. It was a great short story, but quite sad at the same time, which I found quite weird. Anyways, it doesn't matter.
When you mentioned her looking at the fire you put a semi-colon, then said 'there were ashes on her dress'. I didn't think it made much sense. Also, try avoiding words that end with 'ly'. Apart from that it was great! Keep writing. .

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