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 Not the Worst or Best Poem Ever Written  [E]
A poem about writing poems
by Prosperous Snow celebrating
Rated: E | (4.0)
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I may suggest changes in my review. This is not meant as 'serious' literary criticism (I’m no expert). It's merely my record of the ‘bumps’ I encounter as I travel through your words. If I'm thrown by a typo, an awkward word, or a line that doesn't scan, then it's likely that others will be as well. My intent in giving a review is to applaud your work and maybe help you to improve it. A review is merely another reference to consider. If the suggestions prove useful, then use them. If I ‘just don’t get it’, then by all means ignore me!


This poem popped up on Read & Review and caught my attention. It's well done, revealing the author's whimsical attitude toward the craft of writing poetry. The meter breaks a bit in places, but overall, I like it.

The only suggestion I could offer is not really a critique. It strikes me that the use of every vs ever might not be intentional? However, this is a poem, so it may be the author's choice.


Keep writing!


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A poet merely pens a mirror, the reader brings the reflection.


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