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Review #4705581
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These Are My JOTtings, Part #2  [E]
We live much of life amid unique choices. Joy is anchored in The One beyond our life.
by Jay O'Toole
         Review for entry/chapter: "Brevee: "Waiting"" 
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Wow! What an effort it is! This is a chain of four outstanding Brevee poems. Each stanza is a separate Brevee poem. Every stanza follows all properties of an excellent Brevee. They combinedly make complete sense.
The narrator is waiting for somebody. Hoping Jesus must send that person. Therefore, the teller is praying for entry from the open door. The waiting period of the narrator ends then.
As a true devotee, the teller knows well that nothing can happen without the wish of God. So, the question arises, is the narrator waiting for a human or God? God already appears in the teller's life. So, It is most probably waiting for a life partner.
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