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Review #4705202
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These Are My JOTtings, Part #2  [E]
We live much of life amid unique choices. Joy is anchored in The One beyond our life.
by Jay O'Toole
         Review for entry/chapter: "Haiku: "Moon"" 
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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It is undoubtedly a traditional Japanese Haiku that fulfils all the characteristics of an Ideal Japanese Haiku. This Haiku creates the nature of the night-time. How does the Moon show us the way in the dark when the Sun is absent? A perfect presentation. I hope your creativity will entertain us forever.
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