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 Returning to the Hotel  [18+]
Now with an ally in the form of Scootaloo, Cherish has access to six pairs of tasty soles.
by VanillaSoftArt
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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It is another exciting part of fiction is here. One of the prime characters, Sweetie Belle, was unfit. So, a van was arranged. Sweetie Belle, Apple Bloom, rarity, Cherish and Scootaloo were there with some others. Though, Scootaloo played the central role.
A few erotic scenes were there. Cherish was at the forefront. He was involved in these scenes. Overall, the writing effort is enjoyable but far away from reality.

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