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 My Wife's Escape  [13+]
A man encounters some new competition for his Wife's time and attention.
by Simple Dykie
Review of My Wife's Escape  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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From word number one, this story creates interest in the incoming. This is a rare art that is executed exceptionally well by the writer. It is a tragic story.
The narrator had a sweet relationship with his wife. Unfortunately, that did not last long. The distance between them started to create. One day, he discovered that she physically disappeared, too. It is a bitter but realistic end.
I must appreciate the story construction.
Write on!

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