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 A Rappers Pain  [E]
the pain they go through
by king josh
Review of A Rappers Pain  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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We often carry some of our pains all through life. It is not intentional, but our deeds force us to accomplish those impacts. It is indeed unfortunate but true. The poet nicely compares the lost game of chess. A wrong step in chess may do absolute damage.
Excellent beginning. Keep writing.
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