Good day,

First of all I would like to wish you all the best for your Account Anniversary!

I find it interesting to read the poems in the length of 24 syllables. You distribute these syllables differently, so that each poem still has a unique form.
The poems don't rhyme - but that's not a bad thing.

I also wouldn't mind reading sequels or more poems like this. For which competition were they written?

What bothers me a bit are the MBs and the other "stuff" under the poems. They interrupt the reading experience. But I can understand if you don't want to remove them.

Love and happy Account Anniversary,
Evie