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![]() | Do I Am I ![]() existential poem ![]() |
Hello Spring, Your poem Do I Am I came up on Read and Review and I'm here to share my thoughts. My first impression was curiostity, the title did draw me. Also the brevity of the piece was a draw. The frame, simple, a poem in 9 lines, the But counts. ![]() The big question of course is asked twice but, the statements made in other lines answers. The "But," is effective. I really liked "I smell the world is vivid" and "I write for words to be read." I see no technical errors other than shouldn't there be a ? after L4? I enjoyed reading this small piece. Thank you. ~~Tink ![]() ![]()
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