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Apple Bloom's Dirty Gas Station Feet  [18+]
After dangling her feet out her family's truck, a girl finds a boy checking out her soles.
by VanillaSoftArt
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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It is compact Fan-fiction. The central character of this story is Apple Bloom and Wave. There is no doubt about it. After dangling her feet out of her family's truck, Apple Bloom finds a boy named Wave, and he is checking out her soles with care. He becomes obsessed with her feet snell. Wave enjoys it very much, and Apple Bloom is also pleased with the entire circumstances.
A fantastic writing effort.
Write on!

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