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 Stuck  [E]
Short poem about feeling stuck and not sure which direction to go
by Mandy Writes
Review of Stuck  
Review by Tinker
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi E.D., I happened on your poem "Stuck" at Read and Review and I'm here to share my thoughts on it.

*Footprints* First Impression The title made me think of writer's block. *Smirk2* I can't pass on a short poem.

*Footprintl* Frame A 13-lines poem written in Free Verse with good use of line breaks.

*Footprintr* Texture, rhythm, word choice, and sonics This poem reads out loud fluently. No surprises.

*Footprints* Suggestions No technical errors jump out at me. I have nothing to offer in the way of improvement.

*Footprints* Overall I thought this piece had a good logical progression and I especially liked the last 3 lines.

Thanks for this read.

~~Tink

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