Hi Big Books, I happened on an oldy of yours "It's Time to Celebrate" at read and review. I'm here to share my thoughts.

First impression The festive appearance on the page is certainly attractive and inviting.

Frame Using the Verse Form, the Pantoum for an Occasional Poem is impressive. Often occasional poems are throw-aways after the event. therefore so many are jingley and not a lot of effort displayed. The Pantoum with its rotating lines, shows a little effort has been afforded.

Texture, rhythm, word choice, and sonics This lyrical piece reads aloud quite fluidly. The upbeat tone sings CELEBRATION!

Suggestions I see no technical error and can offer no thoughts on improvement. It is not high poetry but it is a well written occasional verse.

Overall I enjoyed reading this piece and I am sure the Webmasters loved it.

~~Tink

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .