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The bird  [E]
Poem I would call Cherita but critics would not
by Evie 🏳️‍🌈 write&blog
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Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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'Cherita' is a six-lined complete story. If there is any advice within it, the readers will find it. The poet only concentrates on telling the story.
You also start brilliantly. There is no doubt about it. The first two stanzas are superb. A story is developing.
But in the third stanza, you lost your way. There is no story in the third stanza, few pieces of advice are there. So, a good story remains incomplete.
So it is not a Cherita.
It is only 'Cherita'type poetry.
Try to rebuild it again.
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