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Review #4692737
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 Love haiku  [E]
Haiku about love
by Nurse25
Review of Love haiku  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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If we maintain syllable pattern 5-7-5. It is not enough to write a Haiku. We should concentrate on the prime purpose of Haiku. That purpose is nothing but to create an image of mother nature. These so Haikus do not make any image of mother nature. Therefore, these are not Haiku.
What is it? It is Senryu. It also maintains a syllable pattern of 5-7-5, and it deals with human minds. So These are a bunch of perfect Senryu.
Keep writing.
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