Hi Espero, I encountered your "Ah, the Junk" at Read and Review. So here I am to do just that.

First Impression I can't think of anyone who could resist that title. We've got to see it.

Form A poem in 32, 8 syllable lines, arranged in 8 quatrains, each made up of 2 rhymed couplets. Rhyme, syllable count, stanza breaks spot on.

Texture, rhythm, word choice and sonics The even syllable count keeps the rhythm fairly fluid. The finding of a cherished cup adds texture and interest, as do the letters from a love outgrown. I loved the word "jerk", the poem couldn't have ended on a better word.

Suggestions No technical errors jumped out at me.

Overall I found this to be fun to read. Thanks for a bit of humor on this soggy day in Cali.

~~Tink

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