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Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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The free verse poem is a real gem. We tend to go for goals. Though we, all global people, want success. But failure comes, as a result, of the first attempt in maximum cases besides for a few exceptions. Though we certainly learn some things from our mistakes. These are our gains.
If we apply them appropriately, we do some better results but remain, again, unsuccessful. After several attempts, we get success.
So two things are essential for us. First, we should keep our patience. Secondly, we must have to nack for learning.
It is a beautiful poem. Write on!

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