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 The Soul of Each Treasure: Drilling Down  [E]
Converse and speak easy, while enlightening - enjoy the wonderment of community - a poem.
by Tim Chiu
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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It is indeed a very much vital poem. The poet wants to converse and speakeasy while enlightening is the need of the hour. Try to enjoy the wonderment of the community.
At this particular moment, we are not in any form of commanding position at all due to our fractures, debases and defraud. So, we are solely responsible for this pathetic situation. Now, we are on the edge of severe destruction. Therefore, the poet does his social duly awakening us at the ultimate moment. So we need to struggle hard to record again. The situation is difficult but not impossible.
We should take lessons from these mistakes and hope they will not be repeated.
Excellent poem though.
Write on!
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