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 Remains of a juvenile delinquent  [13+]
Say she proved her existence to you./ Pray that someday someone cared.
by Kåre Enga in Montana
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Wow! What an excellent poem it is! Undoubtedly, it is a psychological poem. But, a compassioned heart needs to feel that poem correctly. Otherwise, the purpose of this beautiful poetry remains unfulfilled.
She had a soft and lovely heart. So, she wished to love you wholeheartedly and just hoped todid the same for her. Her hand to his hand to cross the way of life. She liked to teach that lesson to her incoming baby.
Some desires remain unfulfilled. It happened in her life, too. But that was with a brutal method that she carved in antique wood.
A sadness touches our hearts. But, that type of many sad happenings may always be done everywhere in our material world. I hope your creative mind will entertain us in future, too.
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