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Natural Mechanism  [18+]
Tales of transformation via natural processes that are fictionalized to bigger impacts
by Jenny Amara
Review of Natural Mechanism  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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It indicates that an engaging story is waiting for us. The beginning points towards some specific goals, which will be clear one by one gradually with the progress of the story. It is the quality of an efficient writer. It is full of excitement. And a thrust for future happenings always remains intact. That interest will help to gain fantastic readability.
Till now, the starting is indeed excellent. There is no doubt about it. I hope the story can maintain the same rhythm in the remaining chapters.

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