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 Frail  [ASR]
A poem about feeling trapped and not being able to escape your own mind
by LivWrites
Review of Frail  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Frail by LivWrites:


Oh, that borderline, where `sob into pillow poetry´ also triggers the urge to *hug* & pray for somebody else!

The poem is darkly relatable, sad, and honest. The admittance of guilt also strengthens its mature steak, yet the tragic ending seems inevitable nonetheless.

I enjoyed reading this, and had no issues about grammar or format either.

Thanks for sharing.
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