Broken by Legacy:

First, I click the `Read & Review´, there is no association with people getting reviewed twice, or more. Some seem simply more active, and some genres & topics will never be reviewed by me at all.

First impression: `Nah, better a broken heart than a broken spine was no overstatement I made. The loss hurts, but scared to live-on & meet new women wasn't part of that.´

So, review stuff... "how can you fix a broken heart?" -> I really do not feel bothered by such, but from my reader feedback I know that some people really need that first h written big H, as it spoils the reading for them (conflicts with their higher education or dedication to proper writing). Author's decision, not mine, of course!

"How can you fix a broken heart?", I wouldn't say poetry is a complete remedy, but taking time to heal & handle it, cuddling the cat, and meeting the kinda person worthy of our poetry EACH can be a step outmatching memorized therapist sermon, as not every problem in life, here it is heartbreak, is a mental disorder, or caused by a mental disorder.

The poem is minimalist, and only has 2.5 stanzas, still it works to express the topic and has no flaws of grammar or format.

I appreciate such minimalism, but others condemn it as `lesser poetry´. Seriously, I am still a member of the Micropoetry Society.








My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .