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 Memories Of Stone  [18+]
Alone with the memories of what once was
by Legacy
Review of Memories Of Stone  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Memories Of Stone by Legacy:


A powerful and less immature kinda poem, very strong in refleting the denial of the person still trying to force back, what two would have to agree on. One alone cannot remedy that, one of the life lessons we so `lovedĀ“ to learn in our young adult years, eh?

The writing is good, the form unconventional, and there are no issues of grammar or any lacck of format.

Interesting, unique poetic musing. Thanks for sharing.

Oh, my answer would be: Hate was the angel not mking me fall back, and my loyalty to that angel made me get rid of those memories of stone, as it is guilt weighing you down, not the both of us. *Wink*
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