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 For her  [E]
Friend who somehow makes life better
by Izyy
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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For Her by Izyy:

An observant piece of poetry, here observing the personality & choices of a female friend.

I would fix some minor issues, and I hope that the author considers it constructive criticism more than smart-mouthing:

She gets blown away by foolish people words -> people's words

Takes them for a ride to heart for Overthing -> Everything

Thanks for sharing!
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