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 Should you see what I see?  [13+]
My expedition through a haunted school.
by Lyons Valentine
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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It is indeed beautiful poetry. First and foremost, that verse becomes an interesting short story. The pure tale is a scary one and full of suspense.
A group of students were going to an expedition to a haunted school. It was very mysterious. In the end, it became too dark. The sadness touches our hearts due to the efficient writing style of the poet. Write on!
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