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Toadette's Story  [18+]
As a new foot slave to Princess Peach, Toadette's life is taken for a hectic, erotic ride.
by VanillaSoftArt
         Review for entry/chapter: "Chapter 31 - Forever Forest Forever
Review of Toadette's Story  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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After a very long gap, another chapter can see here. Toadette is the narrator. She is the central character, too. Though the role of Her Highness and Princess are significant, too. Minh T also played a crucial part in the story.
In this chapter, Toadette and Minh T are in the deep forest. Now, they carried some essential envelopes with them. Being a slave, they did not get the proper security with them. Though, many dangers were waiting in the way. If we follow Toadette's career as a slave, we would observe that she was habituated to dealing with the hazard. Her common sense and patience played a key role there.
Minh T never took Toadette readily. But, as a slave, they have to work together. In this way, they could read each other well. It is reality. The writer tells us the truth in this chapter. It was a dangerous adventure. Even some of them could spoil either's life. The suspense continues in maximum rhythm. What will happen next? We are waiting anxiously.
The pace is excellent. Write on!

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