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Review #4680381
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These Are My JOTtings, Part #2  [E]
We live much of life amid unique choices. Joy is anchored in The One beyond our life.
by Jay O'Toole
         Review for entry/chapter: "Christmas at the Piano" 
Review by Monty
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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This is a fine poem for this time of year, The AB scheme is right on target and the 8 syllable scheme is steady so as well as the story this poem tells, the rhythm, rhyme and imagery are all found. I enjoyed the read very much. You have done a great job with the message sent to this reader. Thank you for sharing.
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