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 Divine Heart (1)  [13+]
A warrior's quest to save a baby in the woods from a coven.
by Starmic Suebear
Review of Divine Heart (1)  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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It is a very exciting beginning of the first chapter of the story. It is a combination of action, mythology and fantasy. The central character of the story is none other than Dasiel. A duel is going to start. But, who was the majestically-dressed lady? Dasiel defeated his opponent in that duel.
On that specific night, he met a tall, beautiful woman with long brown hair and largely white, feathery wings. She gave a mission to save Savara with the necessary directions. Dasiel started to fulfil the essential responsibilities. He went to that wooded area. He met a woman there named Sheziana. She helped him by seeing the direction. Dasiel had killed all of the witches and warlocks and saved Savara. Though he would not survive. It is the characteristic of a true warrior who does not care about his own safety. He can sacrifice self-life for sake of protecting others from evil forces. It is simply a brilliant performance. I hope the rest of the chapters will also be able to ftlfil our expectations.

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