*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4680203
Review #4680203
Viewing a review of:
 
Are We There Yet?  [ASR]
Des begins to question the wisdom of taking his kids to the football.
by Greg M
Review of Are We There Yet?  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
It is indeed a real family story. How do a family, Des, his wife and his children, spend a few hours in a car? It is the subject of the little tale. That is a nicely compiled story. How do the parents have to adjust to their kids? It sets a perfect example of it. Overall, these are some scenes of an ideal and happy family. It is written quite well.
** Image ID #2275135 Unavailable **


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
   *CheckG* You last responded to this review 12/22/2022 @ 5:43am EST
Printed from https://writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4680203