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Freeing  [E]
How writing frees me
by green supports Israel
Review of Freeing  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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It is a traditionalal Japanse poem. But, it is not a Haiku. It is a Senryu. The syllable structure of a Senryu is the same as Haiku. The only difference is we create an image of mother nature in a Haiku but a Senru shows the feelings of our minds and hearts. So, hope, frustrations, lust, love or omethinglike those which can capture the state of our minds are Senryu.
How writing can free you, it is nothing but your feeling that expresses your liking. So, it a Traditional Japanese Senryu, not a Haiku.
But, you write it extremely well. Once again, we get a brilliant poetry from you. Please continue this performance.

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