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 Crossing the Bridge  [XGC]
Short story of a woman and her first lesbian experience. Feedback greatly appreciated
by meg71186
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: XGC | (5.0)
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It is an exciting short story about a woman and her first lesbian experience. The first sexual experience of life is none other than entering a new life after crossing a bridge. A psychological change is also made. It is going superbly. But, the description of erotica scenes takes too much space. So, it becomes a story for strictly adult readers. Write on!
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