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 Natasha & Naomi  [13+]
A girl goes through the woods one night and finds a slime girl.
by The Phantom
Review of Natasha & Naomi  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Naomi preferred to work hard in her study, especially for the final. So, she went to a nearer library to take some vital notes. Naomi spent the whole day there and gathered a few important notes. At the time of the return, She met a slim cute girl who did not know her name. Naomi gave her a name. That was Natasha. She is begging to take her with Naomi. Naomi agreed. Natasha was a bit childish. Though, they were enjoying each other's company.
It is an excellent beginning. I hope we will enjoy mort incoming parts.
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