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 Natasha & Naomi: Job Hunt  [13+]
The 2nd entry. After the first entry, Naomi has to find a job so they can have food.
by The Phantom
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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It is another nice-looking part of Naomi and Natasha. It is a compact short story. Again, Naomi has to find a job so they can have food. That time fortune favours her ultimately. After several failed attempts at the job, she went to take food in a restaurant dejectedly, where he met David, her collage-friend. she got a job as a shelf there.
Though it is laborious, there is a scope to earn a handsome amount of money. The experience of the first day's workload indicates that. It makes her happy.
It is written very livelily. Write on!

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