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Monster  [E]
My recent single, planning on making a demo on it... Tell me if I should improve it!
by Lili J. - On/Offline
Review of Monster  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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The lyricist shares self-experience with us to inspire us to fight against evil forces. Though it is mainly written for teens. We all can take lessons from it. First, the narrator tells us how difficult to fight loneliness in our society. The teller also intimates that she is very much aware of her right. To live a meaningful and prosperous life is a right for every human being. She is ready to fight for those fundamental rights.
She knows that every life is a summation of different shades. Whereas making others adopt something is nothing but a crime. At least, the narrator will never misuse her power.
It is emotional as well as exceptional writing. The sense of rhythm is admirable. It helps to reach a different peak. Thanks for sharing this fantastic lyric. Write on!

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