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 Loving You (First Love)  [E]
I've been writing bad poetry and decided to write a poem for my girlfriend.
by Lucy Baker
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Wow! What a beautifully written poem it is! Undoubtedly, the narrator loves his girlfriend too much. There is no ale in our material world to measure it. He is not only very romantic, but that is also the root of his love being too deep. So, he can not differentiate his identity from her soul. Therefore, he becomes obsessed with her, and it is easy to love her as it is an automated tendency.
It is a fantastic beginning. Go ahead.
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