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Hi a112yearoldman,
This is a fantastic chapter. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what is actually in the chapter. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the chapter without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the chapter. They will read to the last word. You have written about your search for a book with has captured your fascination. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the chapter tedious. You use excited style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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