Hi FalsePoet,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled with love, joy, then disappointment. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone dreaming, early in the morning, of someone they have loved and lost. I was filled with sorrow and sympathy for the speaker. I read to the last word to see what happens to them. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.