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Bloodthirsty Nights  [13+]
A song for the protagonist of my novel...
by LazyWriter
Review by Angus
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi, Shiki!
I'm no musician, so I can only by what I think you mean, but I do like this.
First off, I love horror and everything dark, and this is certainly dark! From what I gather, you start out as a slave to your impulses and the voices in your head, willing to take down anything and anyone who gets in your way. But as time goes on and a female vixen comes into your life, you let your shields down and no longer listen to those voices or let those impulses rule you, and together neither of you are 'haunted' anymore.
That's what I see, anyway. Am I at least close?
Regardless, I'd love to hear this set to music because it does have meaningful words! In other words, by all means you should 'rejuvenate' it!
Kee ponw ritin gon, Shiki, and once again, welcome to WdC!

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