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Review #4436127
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 From Beyond  [13+]
Just ordinary dust bunnies
by Prosperous Snow celebrating
Review of From Beyond  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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#1188309 by iKïyå§ama
Review! *Angelic*

I am also reviewing your item because it popped up on the random review generator.

*Monster2* I was very creeped-out about the description of the dust bunnies being more than a week or more since the last vacuuming under the bed. *Shock2* You really did a stellar job of hooking the reader into the poetic musings, here. I thought of all sorts of horr and intrigue being multiplied under the furniture of every home, and some alien force being behind it, awaiting sufficient population to take over the world!

*Ha*Dang, I didn't expect this to be a chilling poem when I saw the words "dust bunnies." What could be more innocent?

*Boat2* I thought the flow was smooth in this free verse poem. It grabbed my attention and took me along for the ride right up until the end. And then there was darkness. The reader is left with a vivid imagination run amok!

Wonderful job, I wouldn't change a word.

Loved this! *Bat2*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch *Witch*



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