Hello Bruce



Disclaimer:
These are only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful and disregard the rest

What a sad poem. It makes me want to cry. Just because the house is old doesn't mean it has to be torn down. I like the title. It does a great job for this poem. It pulls the reader in. I thought at first it was going to be spooky because of the title.

There is a good rhythm to the poem with each line rhyming. It has a good flow to it as well. It doesn't fee forced.


Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading Terrace End.
Keep on writing.


Gypsy Ann

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